I like the way you used red and blue to emphasize words in your quote. Right now your quote (especially the green words) is kinda hard to read, so if you make the whole quote a bit bigger, that will help.
good quote but make the font BIGGER. its hard to read. like the emphasis on kill and stronger though. nice selection of words. good alignment as well. everything ties in well together though. but again change the size!
I like the way you used red and blue to emphasize words in your quote. Right now your quote (especially the green words) is kinda hard to read, so if you make the whole quote a bit bigger, that will help.
ReplyDeletegood quote but make the font BIGGER. its hard to read. like the emphasis on kill and stronger though. nice selection of words. good alignment as well. everything ties in well together though. but again change the size!
ReplyDeletei like the qoute, but its way to small make it bigger. good alignment though.
ReplyDeleteLike the emphasis on the "kill" and "stronger". since it's so small it was hard to read. also i like the font change on "kill" very nice.
ReplyDeleteits all good, just make it a bit bigger
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